The modern translation of Hamlets soliloque:
There is but one question. Should i do something or should i not? Would it be better to just suffer in silence, or stand up for myself and fight for what is right? Should i die, should i sleep and rest in hope that i may dream and have it come true and reduce what has become a nightmare of my life? For so long this burden has been set upon me. Who believes in me and what exactly does life truely have to offer me. How corrupt is the world truely? Laws are not followed and the world goes about its wicked deeds with no mercy on the righteouss. What of the lonely man who is righteous and hardworking? He is cast aside and sticken with hate and a heavy burden. Who shows him respect he will simply be cast aside and trampled on. Our minds and our thoughts consume us and weaken us. But Ophelia, what about you? you are so kind and gentle yet the world could be so easily stricken on you. you shall not be involved in this corruption and dispicable consipracy. go, escape and be not a part of this mess that has become my life. I will take care of it since it is my burden.
1. Exigence — What needs doing at this point? In other words, what is compelling Hamlet to speak at this moment in the play? “He knows that it is time for him to step up and do something about what has happened and what is happening. He can no longer suffer in silence and it is his duty to show everyone the truth.”
2. Audience – The audience is comprised of people who can in some way act on this exigence. Who is Hamlet’s primary audience and how does that influence his choices? Who is Hamlet’s secondary audience and how does that influence his choices? [Hint: they are not on the stage] “Im not too sure about the audience but it seems as though hamlet is talking to the people under his fathers rule, telling them that what has happened is not right and that he will be the one to put an end to it.”
3. purpose What is the purpose of Hamlet’s speech? “The purpose of Hamlets speech is basically pretty obvious. Hamlet wants to avenge his father and his speech is building him up to act. The speech shows his emotions and how he is feeling at this point in the book, and it helps give the reader persective on where Hamlet is coming from.”
4. Appeals: Which appeal(s) does Hamlet use to convince and/or motivate his audience? Reference specific lines. “He uses depressing diction and visualy expresses his thoughts and how he portrays them. By telling the reader what he feels and visualizing it he can motivate the audience and gain their support”
Ethos: Appeal to the character of the speaker “it is clear that hamlet feels lost and alone and that this matter rests in his hands. He must avenge his father and stand up for himself and for what is right.”
Pathos: Appeal to the emotions or interest of the audience “This speech also motivates the audience into believing in Hamlet and gives the audience encouragement in Hamlet.”
Logos: Appeal to logic “A man who has commited murder is now seated at the throne, he has married the wife of the man he has killed and Hamlet is the only one who knows the truth. It is clear that he must defend his fathers honor and reveal the king.”
5. Figures of speech, imagery, diction, syntax: What literary devices does Hamlet employ? Where do you see him making comparisons? Which tropes–similes, metaphors, personification, hyperbole, etc. does he use? How do these comparisons relate to his rhetorical purpose? What particularly vivid images stand out? What effect do these images have on Hamlet’s rhetorical purpose? “Who would fardels bear, to grunt and sweat under a wearylife. (displaying the stuggle he is undergoing and how it weakens him.) The conscious does make cowards [of us all] (we are rules and weakened by our thoughts and must fight for what we believe in or they will overpower us.”
6. How do you respond to Hamlet’s soliloquy? In other words, what do you think of him right now? “Hamlet is gaining courage to stand up for himself and he is becoming more and more brave as the story unfolds. at this point in the book the reader begins to side and relate to hamlet rather than simply feeling sorry for him and his situation.”